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[An Original Sonic Fanfic]

Despite the poor animation quality, I've gotta say: Not too shabby! This was pretty damned funny. If I had to say one thing to work on, it would be the voice acting. Try moving the mic a bit further from you and then speak a bit more naturally. And never use the built-in mic, use a Rock-Band mic at least. Anyway, if you could animate it a bit better that would also be cool, but if not, I'd go for a bit more of a comic-book style. (Shift from panel to panel.) Basically, I'm just saying to try and clean it up a bit more.

[Mawesome Effect]

You just game the awesome-series a bad name. You basically just pissed all over the goddamn Vatican of flash series'. And the worst part is that you didn't even troll well. If you're gonna troll, troll hard... You even gave the trolls a bad name..... I'm disappointed in you...

[Mass effect three Parody]

Yeah, that wasn't very funny... Normally this wouldn't be an issue, but you listed it as a comedy, so I was expecting to at least chuckle... Maybe ask some friends to critique your jokes before releasing them on to the internet?

[Skyrim : Dovahbear]

If Skyrim was like this, I might actually play it... To the modding forums!

[Derpcraft]

Almost an "Awesome" cartoon!

If this was called "AwesomeCraft" or something, I'd think it was a Cartoon by Egoraptor! Seriously funny stuff there man. Favorite part was "Hell yeah, I found myse-- O-oh, shit it's gold..." Keep up the awesomeness!

[Dark Sonic Shorts]

So many errors!!!

I'm going to try not to be harsh, here, but you did NOT do a good job on this.
1. You made the sprites too large, which doesn't look good, at all. You need to compensate with a smaller screen size.
2. You didn't do very good voice acting. You need to practice doing the characters voice with friends, and if they don't think it sounds like the character don't do the voice.
3. You need an original idea before you make a joke. Please research carefully, then decide what and what not to use.
4. You're jokes weren't funny. I don't actually have anything to add to this one.
5. Tails isn't homosexual. Don't use "gay" as a derogatory term, even if it's a fact.
6. You didn't get your jokes to the punchline fast enough, try doing a collab with friends, then come back to doing solo work.

[Spend It Wisely]

One question.

Why don't you submit this to Cartoon Network? This looks like it could be as big as Chowder! I didn't see anything wrong with this, so I haven't got any advice for improvements! Keep it up, man!

[Mass Effect 2 Parody]

No, dude.

This was awful. It seems like you just decided to play around in flash then started drawing Mass Effect characters, then used Audacity to raise your voice pitch while you made up lines. Trust me, this isn't worth the effort you didn't put into it. If you had actually decided to research the game for ideas, then made a serious effort, then this may have been a decent parody. I'm not trying to bash you, but this wasn't even close to anything remotely funny, and the high-pitched voice thing never works like this, it's only an annpoyance. Also, if you had played the game, you would know that QUARIANS AREN'T GETH. Legion is Geth, Tali is Quarian. I know it's just a parody, but it doesn't work if you break canon. I'm sure you could have made this funny, but it's not...

Again, I didn't write this to be mean, I wrote it to help you in the future. I'm sure people are just going to flag this review anyway, but I want it to be known that it's not inteded to hurt you.

littlegoblet responds:

thats ok basicly everything you said was true. My heart wasn't in this at all but I thought it would be funny to make out that Tali was geth because the Quarians where the ones who created them so that maybe they would have the same characteristics even though logic tells me that was highly unlikly. So yeah this was just a lame joke. I used the high pitch voice cause I hate the sound of my voice. and as for graphics I did short cuts where ever I could. I didn't even bother to have the voice in sync. I probably should have just did a comic on this and not bother with animation realy lol. so no hurt feelings buddy. Lately however I have been investing alot of effort on the game I want to make. Hopefuly it will be a great improvement but my animating skills will still suck unfortunatly. :D

[Rick Mann vs Boss Man]

An awesome flash!

I loved it! "Beedebedebedebebedee!" The animation, sprites, and music were above par, by a large margin. It could have been a bit longer though.

[TLoZ: Prequel of Time]

Pretty far from canon...

Sorry, but this flash didn't make sense with the facts from OoT. For one, the Kokiri can't leave the forest, or else they would die. Another thing is, link didn't have his Triforce piece shine until he was an adult. Also, he wasn't named after leek, even though it sounds similar. I understand that you were just trying to make a parody, and the flash was kind of funny, but it wasn't really immersive enough to be considered "Good". Also the voice acting was sub-par, by a large margine. If this was an early flash, it would be great, but it doesn't really meet the standards of flash from 2008 to now...

Also, please not that I'm not trying to put you or youir flash down, I'm just commenting on some of the key errors in it.